the writing essay

Miss Dia,
about the writing essay, there is something that i learned. it is the way how i want to make my writing essay much better. right now i know how to expand the content of the topic. thanx a lot for your patience in teaching me who makes you almost get mad. hehe.
however, i'm sorry if what i'm saying will break your heart. the truth is im not understand 100%. i will let you check my essay. i hope you will show me my corrections.

about the speaking activities

Hye, Miss Dia.
About the speaking activities, actually it was a good activity for me.
I am sure that other my friends too enjoyed with the activity.
But, the important thing is it had build up my skill to speak confidently in English.
I'm really hope that you will make some kind of this activity again for the next time.